Someone will in english to correct my paragraph?

Last week when we went to a concert, we heard a nice poetry from the poet, the intonation of this poetry made our feelings very high and the oratory was very interesting also the soliloquy in the poetry was written with a nice words, so we loved it and all the audience ovation and asked the poet to encore apart from that poem again, I am sure if anyone see a replica of the poetry, will find a great meaning in it.

first line, should be “… we heard a nice poem… ”

instead of intonation, use “tone”

rather than “made our feelings high”, use something like “gave us a good feeling”… I don’t know exactly what you are trying to say here.

no “a” before “nice words”

“and all the audience ovation… ” should be “the entire audience applauded and asked for an encore.

Last sentence “I am sure anyone who sees this poem will find great meaning in it.

Hope this helps.

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